by ArtForm
what a frightening way to go - such great work... fantastic all the way.. thanks for letting us go on an intriguing journey... looking forward to more more more please...
I really thought the shower was a sweet touch to the story. And thank you for giving us a proper ending like this. Really loved it!
this is my favorite story of yours was well written imaginative and very interesting now i get to go on to your new story
My dear you are most welcome for the little feedback I left. You tied up a lot of lose ends, but left a few open for more story lines. It is always a pleasure to read you work and looking forward to more.
Wow... I think you made me picture HP's maze you know with all those wild stuff going on. I thought it was really interesting how a mind can literally be a maze like that. Very unique. And I must say that this is the best ending I've read so far!
for more than clearing up those few loose ends. I thought the surprise baby shower was a really sweet surprise and the way you had the three Culzean men working together was a really a nice sign of the future to come. (maybe in a story maybe not). The whole exploration of the mind was superb. We all have secrets we hope stay buried in our minds and just the thought of someone being able to get to those secrets is scary. To say nothing of the whole complete memory of ones life disappearing is unfathomable.
Thank again for clearing up those loose ends and maybe leaving a few crumbs for a future series. I mean at some point you should let us know what name Draven and Amber chose for their daughter!
This chapter was totally unexpected! I thought you were finished with chapter 13... but this totally blew my mind. Thank you for this extra chapter. I really loved it.
Gruesome punishment. But what would any of us do to protect our children? I am glad that you wrote this-I wasn't sure that the story was finished when you started the next series. Well written.
Have spent the long Easter weekend reading this and TLAW and look forward to more of your stories. Congratulations.
From beginning to the end. Good to see the strong family bond throughout the series. Love does conquer all! Keep writing.
love your stories been reading the all weekend, only complaint would be i felt this ended a bit too soon, but loved it all the same. well done keep up the great writing
I truly appreciated your twists and skilled writing throughout the series, I enjoyed both To Love a Were and this one. Talented
OMG, when I read "Benedicta killed my mate so I killed her" I flipped so hard, thinking oh man I feel 10 more chapters coming my way, and on the last page of the freaking last chapter. Oh you're good.
I enjoyed you story very much and look forward to more such works from you.
this was my favorite story out of the whole trilogy!!! i loved the romance, passion, drama, and turmoil wrapped up in one lol. i was wondering if you'd every do a fluffy short story on everyone pregnant or shortly after they have they're babies. you give a brief introduction to the were, hybrid and vampire children in pushing boundaries, but it was confusing trying tot figure out who was who.