All Comments on 'Into the Wild'

Intensely captivating and erotic. Your use of a slow, steady buildup created a wonderful sense of passion and sexual abandon. Please keep them coming.

The perfect length and amount buildup with a very sexy payoff! I like that it was fantasy-ish but not so much as to draw away from the focus of the story. Excellently done. Very well told. I will definitely be returning to this story.