All Comments on 'Introducing Mark Ch. 2'

Think you should of spent more time on Julie losing her virginity properly. Maybe made it bit longer had like Mark fucking her with some lube (ky) always relieves some of the pain. Dad should have also gotten into Scene with her. Hope there is something coming up about Robin's daughter noval idea it works even better cause in roughly half the states you can still marry a 1st cousin you could have Mark and Amanda met and marry legally, just a thought.

Keep up good work. thanks

It is a really good story of a really loving family, but just a little bit too scientific. A lot of references to the Professor. Some more explanation about this Oenida group and an account of Fathers first time to bed her plus her first simultaneous orgasm with her brother would be welcome. Her first 'group sex' experience needs to be talked about, too. All in all, an excellent tale. Just needs 'fleshing out' -haha-a little. Thank you- I can go to sleep and have good dreams tonight.