All Comments on 'Stalking Intruder and the Virgin'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Beautiful story, Lauren - believably expressed :)

And I know you'll enjoy your spanking...................... ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A wonderful story -

- please write more of it! Five stars and a huge 'Thank you!'.

wilhelmrosenkrantzwilhelmrosenkrantzover 11 years ago
Ooh!

A nubile young girl, naked, tied and exposed to a stranger's lustful depredations? That's terrible!

So do write more! :D

Loved the story. Very hot, not crude, and the reader is allowed to enter the thoughts of the girl. It's also well written (hurrah for good grammar and spelling).

Very naughty and entirely delightful.

Many thanks for contributing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent start

This is pretty hot already, and it's just begun! Can't wait for more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing!

This is amazing for your first story! Please write more! Thank you!

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