All Comments on 'Involved In Mom And Dad's Game Ch. 02'

by LuckySon

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Is the dragging out of this story supposed to be fun?........chapter after chapter when you could tell a story in several parts long enough to be interesting.

This has too much build up and not enough action.

Im bored to death waiting for the next part or something good to happen.

Give up now and save us all the torture of reading this rubbish.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
interesant

First part was promissing, but second was disapointed to me. Too little imagination, and too simple story.

toJohnny7toJohnny7about 14 years ago
3 stars is a gift

In my opinion this was posted too early in the story. The story needs more content and someone cumming to make even a chapter worthwhile. I like where this seems to be going but this wouldn't get anyone off.

LuckySonLuckySonabout 14 years agoAuthor
Problem with the e-mail

To the readers who sent feedbacks about my stories: my provider filtered the emails from Literotica as spam and deleted them. I've fixed the problem: could you write me again? I'd like to know what do you think about the stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
very good

un like some of the other comments i found your story very erootic, I keep re-rading it many thanks

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