by storytyme
I wish other writers could understand that every other word doesn't have to be the F word to make a good read.
Wow, good story overall. BUT what an invasion of the wife's privacy. What is she going to think when she finds out that good ol' husband has been spying on her without her knowledge? I know I'd be pissed. The ends don't always justify the means.
Your story brings out a topic that all of us have in common; that of taking each other for granted. This story hit home and made me think about my own situation. This was a solid short story and I truly enjoyed it.
- While I would never set up cameras to spy on my wife,(She'd leave me if she found out) I certainly have fallen into the "take her for granted" habits described here. She's even told me from early in our marriage,that me being affectionate to her is what turns her own. After 30 years of marriage I often am neglectful but then wonder why there's little or no sex. This well-written story is a great reminder to me to get my act together and SHOW my wife how much I love her.
That never stopped my wife from wanting to be screwed, and it never stopped us from 'doing it'.