All Comments on 'Island Romance'

I enjoyed reading and cumming, hope you write more.

Look forward to reading how you continue this story

with good electricity between them and some glimpse of your view (or fantasy) on sex. But his fucking her in the ass and moving immediately to vaginal sex without any consideration for vaginal infection is not very realistic in consideration of their level of education and very apparent awareness of sexual behaviour. Anyway, please keep writing.

I enjoyed the story but for my taste, things moved too fast for it to have much realism. The two went from work colleagues who didn't know each other very well to uninhibited lovers in a very short time. I would have enjoyed a slow, sexy build up to the sex. You have a talent for descriptive writing, and I hope you'll continue.

but the flame had already burned out before the story began.