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Thanks again to D. for a wonderful editing job. I hope everyone enjoyed this story. I value your comments, it's how I improve my writing.
- COMMENTS
elisebeealmost 9 years agoDream weaver. I was so enchanted. Thank you for your lovely story of submission and trust...lc
Pixie87almost 13 years agoThat was amazing! I don't think I have ever been so engrossed in a story.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoBeautiful, So many words, I can not choose the best to describe, portray, say what I am feeling. Keep it up!
trippychickover 14 years agoIt took me a while to read all the chapters but I'm glad I did. This series I have to say is now one of my faves. I wish you the best in your writing and in life:)
Anonymousabout 15 years agoYour writing is very beautiful. I loved the way you described the characters and their love and pain. I have to disagree with the previous reviews about sloppy seconds. I related to Carla in the story. There are varying degrees of submissiveness. Melanie had the highest and was very much into pain and the desire to be used completely. Carla, although aroused by the feeling of possesion and punishment was happy with the levels she went to with Quinn. She wasn't Melanie and I think if she tried to be it wouldnt have worked. It was very brave of her to sacrifice herself for Melanie and Quinn and proved her love for him. Lets face it, Melanie could have decided to be selfish and take her body to be with Quinn forever. The writing was so good that I was scared that she just might do that. I have really enjoyed this story and it has given me a lot to think about. You wrote it so well that I was completely absorbed. I hope you continue to write.
Uyraellabout 15 years agoThis is one of the finest stories I have read on Literotica.
Exceptionally well done!
As an author, I appreciate the work you put into it, and the care with which it has been so superbly crafted.
My Respectful Compliments for an exceptionally Fine Tale.
Blessed be, and warm Regards, ^Uyraell^.
