All Comments on 'It All Just Came Together'

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BobNbobbi about 13 years ago

Very nice

I enjoyed this; the adjective that comes to mind is sweet. Sweetness pleasures the tastebuds with several sensations, not always syrupy.

MyMPTP about 13 years agoAuthor

Glad you liked it.

More soon.

m48gunner about 13 years ago

Good Story

Thanks! Although technically, she did cheat before speaking to her husband about it....but, I guess she was confident enough in their relationship to do so.

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Well...

...are you going to expand on this one or just let us daydream about it? Now that I wrote that, I think the story is good as it stands...nice job.

Read your BIO, can't wait to ee what else you can come up with and...DO, come up with something...more somethings!!!

Thanks!

ythebadger over 11 years ago

Nicely done story

Gentle and evocative.

26thNC over 3 years ago

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After the comment by BobNBoobi, I didn't need to read it to know it was about a cheating whore.

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