All Comments on 'It Started At Christmas Pt. 05'

This was a beautifully written Chapter in a wonderful series. I can't wait for graduation either and to learn what will happen when they once again have each other. In the back of all of all of this between Alan and Victoria, I wonder how Allison's own love affair with her female lover(s) will fold into the stories climax. While this is not the first incest story I've read, it is one where the complex family relationships seem to be leading to a dramatic or explosive conclusion. A well planned and executed piece of writing. I can only ask that the next Chapter will not make us wait too long! Thank you!

Good story, the previous chapters were too short. This chapter has better length, keep up this series.

I appreciate the substitute author of this chapter but I miss you. My opinion is that your style and length is better suited to the story and the almost superhuman sexploits of this authort's style gets past the believable.. Looking forward to more from you

A truly amazing read... passionate and sweet