All Comments on 'It Was Fate Ch. 05'

plz more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I'm enjoying the story completely, but I have one small pet peeve. English has many words that sound the same but are spelled differently and have different meanings. Such as: there, their and they're. In a lot of stories I see folks using "there" for all of them, and it is not something that spell check will pick up.

Other than that, I am totally enjoying your story. I hope you keep up your writing and have much success with it.

more please it is a great story but if you could make it a lot longer that would be great.

PPPPLLLLEEEEZZZZ more am not a patient customer but i love the story so far !!!!!Oh and anyone complaining about English should learn it in all its crappy forms lol !!!!!!

Please write another chapter soon this story is good. Don't leave it too long.

HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011

add more please i can't wait too see wht happens next

I hope you get a chance to finish this story and thank you for the time that you have already put in to it hope to see more from you

Are you going to finish "It was fate".I love the story and i want to see more.

Liked "Fate" better.

it would be a shame to leave this unfinished! so do the world a favor and keep it coming haha.