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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wonderful

i loved the shifting pov... very well done...

I especially appreciated the ending and the acknowledgement of the ability to fantasize with your partner.

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Arouse me. Read my stories, look at my comments, fill my imagination with your fantasies and experiences. I am a dream, a concept, a creation. I exist only in your mind. I am your fantasy. I am an old, round man - at least part of the time. Or an old round woman. And then...

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