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All Comments on 'It's in the Book Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OK Story, Could Be a Little Better Written

Pretty good. Hoping you will be posting more chapters soon. Suggest you pay more attention to How you write as well as What you write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Dream Lover

I liked it. But was she real or as you said in the book

C_frommnC_frommnover 14 years ago
Like the Story

Hope You Follow - Up with more of timmy's adventures.

and see where the Book takes him and the Stone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
more More MORE

c'mon where are you?

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