All Comments on 'It's Just a Business Transaction Ch. 12'

Wow!!! You have to finish it by tomorrow otherwise the suspense will kill me. You are an awesome writer. Are you planning to write any other series because if you are, I will become an avid reader of your stories.

oh my god this is going to be torture to wait for the next chapter, please please please hurry or i will die of suspense! this story has been great from the beginning, although not perfect and containing little flaws here and there, i thoroughly enjoyed everything. please don't make us wait!

.... really, really good shit. I hope that you finish this story by tomorrow. I think it's one of the best stories that I have every read on Literotica. Please, please, please finish the story b y tomorrow.

does he have a fetish for contracts or something? alex seems a bit bizzare.

besides a forced contract is bogus, where is the witness and notary?

finally a baby comes under family court, contract portions dealing with children are invalid, for the children's best interest. a contract about such is as valid as toilet paper. Aida could always challange him about a child in court, regardless of a peice of paper.

now a billionare might manipulate a court - but why this fetish about contracts?

finally, a marraige IS a contract in itself - why would he need a contract to make her stay? since Lincoln freed the slaves, you cannot contract yourself away, a contract has to deal with MONEY, payments and penalties. Aida could always divorce, the prenup contracts only limit how much money goes to whom in divorces.

this is a good series, but Alex seem a bit bizzare - more so than the revenge minded transexual sociopath Sonja.

(IIRC: psychopath kills for joy of killing. sociopaths kill when someone is in their way but get no joy, unless it is getting their way. Sonja seems socio, not psycho to me.)

This is an amazing story. Please hurry with the next chapter. I've been transfixed since I read the first one. Keep up the great work.

you've got a great gift for writing and the plot is superb.

I love this story i think i know where you're going with who sonja really is but i wont say anything for the people who havent caught on yet. This story is great but you should pay attention to your verb tenses they're all over the place.

OH MY GOD I LOVED IT!!! Please write a new chapter before I loose what is left of my sanity! & i bet you dont want that on your Conscience. You are a great writer please continue! I will be looking daily for the next chapter!