All Comments on 'Jackie and Rhonda Ch. 03'

by big_mike610

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centauri4centauri4about 16 years ago
Better than the prequel

I am beginning to see how the story pieces fit together and I am sticking to my original suggestion that you should keep writing. This chapter is pretty nicely balanced and just erotic enough to be qualified for Literotica.

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