All Comments on 'Jack's ex, Jack's slave Ch. 03'

Especially for a first submission, this is quite outstanding. Thank you for sharing an obvious talent for writing with us and please bring us much more of it! Five stars.

this chapter incorporated exactly the type of added love I was hoping for, while still of course displaying a pretty serious amount of anger and ownership. Personally, I prefer monogamous bdsm (threesomes are one thing but him having sex with anyone ever while she waits just for him is different), because I think ultimately that is the price for someone's willing enslavement, and in my experience that is one of the only ways a submissive can trust her master completely, is knowing she is the only one he uses. but certainly, the kind Jack wants right now is not uncommon, and maybe it will change as he grows to love and trust her more fully again. Loved this chapter and look forward to more!

Now you are talking about a M/s relationship. Everything is done with love. Glad you got there. Could be some fun stories off this. Thanks

Five stars! Please keep writing!

simply perfect. Pace, tension, characters, technical , dialog -- all perfect. If you've not been writing here -- where have you been writing? This story sounds like a wrap to me. Hope you expand you storylines in the future. Five-stars for each chapter. Take care...and thanks bunches

This isn't BDSM - this is "Torture/pain". WAY over the top. Nothing stimulating or interesting about it.

"Jack was stunned. In one day, this previously independant woman had admitted all she was was an object for him to use and abuse according to his whims."

I'm a bit stunned too, she's just been too easy, I can see how men get off on this but I'd prefer if you gave her a voice and it was at least somewhat conficted. So far you haven't given us a clue that she has a personality at all.

The making of just another mindless doormat.

at first, the way he was treating her actually pissed me off quite a bit, as it was more abuse than a healthy dom/sub relationship, and i was disgusted. but then.... well the end of this became what a true bdsm relationship should be, and he realized he loved her and he dommed for her with love, not revenge, in mind. thank you for finishing the story on a good note