by High Desert
FANTASTIC!! Love when white women & men suck on
black cock. This went further with a black women involved.
HOT! HOT!
Awesome! We share your fantasies too! Well written. Very, very sexy stories. Post more!
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It was a great story but it lacked authenticity. I think it would have been more erotic if some Jamaican language (patois) or at least Jamaican inflections had been used.
Trust me - nowhere in the ghetto would you hear a Rasta man allowing another fella to touch him. You should have taken them back to the hotel room or on a secluded beach.
ALl that said, I'm only picking holes because I'm Jamaican and I can comment on setting and local behaviour.
Apart from that I loved the action!