All Comments on 'Jamaican Lullaby'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
UNBELIEVABLE

FANTASTIC!! Love when white women & men suck on

black cock. This went further with a black women involved.

HOT! HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Love both stories...so hot!

Awesome! We share your fantasies too! Well written. Very, very sexy stories. Post more!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Needs Autheticity

It was a great story but it lacked authenticity. I think it would have been more erotic if some Jamaican language (patois) or at least Jamaican inflections had been used.

Trust me - nowhere in the ghetto would you hear a Rasta man allowing another fella to touch him. You should have taken them back to the hotel room or on a secluded beach.

ALl that said, I'm only picking holes because I'm Jamaican and I can comment on setting and local behaviour.

Apart from that I loved the action!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
don't let a nigger screw your ass, you white nigger!

see title

BITCH!!

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