All Comments on 'Jan & Her Stepmother Pt. 01'

It's just a good story that could be great without the immaturity, and the *astericks* which break up the intensity.

It's crazy but, somehow the asterisks made it sort of unique and different. I presume it's a way of setting off certain words within your text. Good story line as well!

Well crafted story. The sex scenes were superb! Great story line (the incest sequel is great too) and fine grasp of dialogue. Peculiar punctuation, but it didn't distract from the story. [Sidebar to the troll below; those are "asterisks", you moron!]

Fully enjoyed it. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

A friendly criticism: Kelly's age changes from 29 to 25 later on. Watch of continuity when editing.

imaginative enough, but should be more tightly written. blank out the asterisks and other punckt points on your keyboard. they make no sense in your hands.

I like the scenario, and you did a great job keeping the cirumstances of the relationship realistic. Good story, I liked it alot.

Reading this was enjoyable and I thought you did prettt good

I can never seem to get enough pussy eating. I truly love the feel of a woman in the throughs of climax/orgasm. That makes me feel good. Just knowing that I caused her to have that much pleasure. Please write more.

I would have preferred more anal play, more ass hole finger fucking. The story was good, hot and sexy but I really do get into anal play. Thanks anyway.