All Comments on 'Jane's Dare Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
the adventures of Donna and Jane

Hi,chapters one and two brilliant very sexual and erotic.

More chapters and more adventures please

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
How

come she steps out of her panties, and then a few sentences later on someone else pushes them to one side to be able to fuck her?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Oh, the world is full of stupid idiot wimp writers

Go tell about your mother, is enought about your whorewife

tell us how a stupid idiot like may come out from a filthy cheating cunt

corpsbalcorpsbalover 17 years agoAuthor
Author's note

Anonymous-panties is completely right, that is a stupid mistake, I'm fixing it now.

As for the Romanian guy? Definitely considering that as a story.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

No one has read this POS for fourteen years? Easy to see why.

asyouwere9asyouwere9over 1 year ago

I love this. The way the first 2 are split up feels good as you ramp up two times. Wish there was more after 3.

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