All Comments on 'Jasmin: Descent Ch. 01'

if your intention was to write a story of thrill, sex, adventure, and incredibly hot sex of a naive, beautiful and yet traditional Japanese girl who has had the ride of her life in bedding countless sexual partners over the span of many years ---- and you did it as a series of 4 to 8 or so installments, and there is NO "HOT" rating, dude, you've wasted your time. <p>

that could mean one of a few things: <p>

(1), the story/stories sucks; <p>

(2), only a few bother to read and fewer bother to rate it, because they don't think it's that worthy or interesting; <p>

(3), story/stories about people/characters whom readers EITHER don't identify with, don't sympathize with, don't care for, could careless about, OR all of them --- EVEN if you (and your Jasmine) think her life was/is quite an insight into human sexual mores and behavior, etc).

Not thing to add--Suggest you take it to heart

Remember this site is not about great literary essays. It's primarily about sex, which this story amply supplies. Aside from that it is also well written, well conceived and plausible. Can't rate at 90% so 100% to balance against the legend in his own mind. Well done, keep it going

You have to keep this going. She is really damaging herself and that poor schmuk.

I just love your stories, and I love this one also. They seem so real - I think they are which makes them even hotter. Keep writing them and updating us - Thanks

Why do you call this whore a loving wife.