All Comments on 'Jasmin: Now Married, Then Guilty'

Starts nowhere, goes nowhere, and has little to offer along the way. No sequel needed.

By the time Jazmine allows herself to get drunk AFTER being told in advance (even on it's own -how credible could that one detail be?) of the plan to rape her yet again, I simply had to give up. How many times do we have to succcumb to the formula of a sensual yet silly silly woman, all to improve the very shaky ego of the supposedly manly dominant spouse who is so self centered and immature that even though his girlfriend then wife was seduced and raped has to drag her through endless emotional trials and abuses in the hopes that one day his bruised little ego will grow. <P>

When there is something a bit different and much more mature (reg. the roles and the quality of the relations between the sexes) I'll be interested to read it.

this is another great chapter of a great series. I love this girl, a complete slut. I hope the author keeps writing. Can't wait for the next

really like this series...keep it going...

I liked it. Sounds even a bit true to me. I know some people that have experienced something similar.

Good writing, keep going.

This story features unbelievably stupid characters acting bizarrely in scenes that do not make sense. The female protagonist becomes a total slut so that her loving boyfriend won't find out just how big a slut she really is. This makes sense how again?

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Last time I checked rape is a felony in Australia so when dear, sweet Jasmin gets raped repeatedly, I expected her to tell the police about it. In a world where law enforcement works, they do a rape kit and DNA match her assailants. Said criminals are convicted and go to jail for a long, long time. End of story. In this fantasy world, with geniuses like Damien patrolling the streets down under, law enforcement in Aussie land has evidently broken down. Common sense must be in short supply as none of the characters here exercise any.

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The writing isn't that interesting, and the storytelling is mediocre. I managed to finish this segment but see nothing to be gained by investing time in the others.

Have to say this story has drawn some ill directed fire. The girl Jasmin has had her world neatly boxed in with no where to turn. Keep it up. Interesting to see how she turns out and what is keeping her silent. Can't be true though can it? Maybe some of it is. Have actually heard of something similar with a part asian girl quite a few years back now

She was coerced or tricked into cheating? If the dude buys THAT, he must must be stupid and naive enough to own a timeshare! Most of the characters in this story were raised on a diet of lead-based paint. Nothing else 'splains it!

how the hell does someone write 5 page sod complete shit....