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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Story has potential but...

Find an editor. They can do wonders for you and your story. There are plenty on this site willing to help. Good luck moving forward.

Sugarpop0369Sugarpop0369over 10 years agoAuthor
Story has potential

I am currently looking for an editor. Thank you for the advice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good Story

I was really getting into it even with the grammar mistakes, then it abruptly ended, leaving me hanging. :-(

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