All Comments on 'Jasper's Taming'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
ever read anythink like this!

This is one of the best storys i have read in this site so far. Is there going to be a second one? Are you going to tell as how Jasper was sold into being a slave in the first place? i will be waitig for more of this story or one like it from you. i would love to read your storys that you are going to post in the near future. Hope there are good as this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Category?

It seems like anal or gay male might be a better choice of category for this type of stroy.

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Good Story

Very creative. I won't penalyze you for the rating, often times the Mods put stories where they want. I could have done without the WWE sayings. I think those took away from your story. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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I would love to hear more about these people

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I have written several different types of short stories; I prefer fantasy or erotica. I have a series (not published) from high school about a secret agent along the lines of the "Pink Panther." He is a clutz that somehow solves crimes along with destroying the city ...