All Comments on 'Jenn'

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 15 years ago
Boy meets girl; girl breaks up with previous boy

and so it goes...A simple (but nice) start of a romance. BTW, what happened to Jenn being uptight?

WhitePythonWhitePythonover 15 years agoAuthor
Story Progress

Thanks again for the feeback. I have started writing Chapter 2 which I am just going to title Jenn Again, rather than Jenn Chapter 2. I'll let you know when I've posted it and its been approved.

shadowsslaveshadowsslaveover 15 years ago
Oh Wow...

AWESOME story! I loved the storyline. Not like the 'usual' stories of a man going in for the kill on a newly single woman. Love your writing skills. It was very erotic and yet sweet all at the same time. I agree that this story could go on a bit with more chapters. It has the potential to become a really great ongoing series but if you decide to leave it as is....it'll still be one of my new favs. Thanks for sharing it :-)

WhitePythonWhitePythonover 15 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thanks for your feedback! I will definitly continue this story line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
AHHHHHHHHHHH!

What a great story! Loved it right from the beginning! I want a 'next time'!!!!!! Please continue on with this one and add more chapters!

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