All Comments on 'Jenna Ch. 01'

continue. Just enticing enough to become a great story series. :)

It takes a brave writer to place a story during slave times in America, but you've done it with an authentic and inoffensive air. I'm a huge history fan, but found some parts of the story to be a bit mired in historical detail. That said, I'm very eager to read future parts!

for a first stoy its really good, better than quite a few ive read..hopefully he will not rape jenna and a romance could build up? looking forward to a second chapter =)

i like where this is going.

i rly enjoyed the beggining and i hope to read more real soon

The romance can come later when Will shows up, I really hope Thomas rapes her.

Please continue soon.

Great story! please continue it soon

i love ur start i hope u have not let this story good its very good

Please continue... I would like to see what happens next very much I would XD

When can we expect the next part?

A great start and would love to know what happen to Jenna. Please do continue with the story.

please continue!

Nice start, you should continue.

Five.

what the fuck is wrong with you people: Jenna was more beautiful than her mother because of her long wavy hair and golden brown skin what a load of shit. it gets a one

Agreed...like really? That's what makes her more beautiful? Slave mentality for a slave story I guess.

Thomas is a douchebag he can't respect his dying fathers wish that Jenna remain "innocent" just because his dick gets hard. I wish the preachers son was actually nice and kind, instead of a sex-crazed asshole, who can't even respect his sick father's wish that Jenna stay "innocent".

I can hardly wait for another chapter, loved reading this

loved reading this story! hope you continue it!

Please finish!

please finsh

It's sooooo good !!!!!

I'm keen on anything historically based so I was hooked when I read the tag line

Its good - really good but it is screaming out for completion - just a great little story as it stands but you could take so much further

Why the hell does every one on this site think its not rape if you hurt and threaten a girl into pretending she likes. Biology says your body responds that doesnt make it sex and not rape so annoying

@interweb88: Why the hell are you in non-con section if you're not into it?

More please!!

Please I need moree