All Comments on 'Jenna Ch. 01'

Please I need moree

More please!!

@interweb88: Why the hell are you in non-con section if you're not into it?

Why the hell does every one on this site think its not rape if you hurt and threaten a girl into pretending she likes. Biology says your body responds that doesnt make it sex and not rape so annoying

I'm keen on anything historically based so I was hooked when I read the tag line

Its good - really good but it is screaming out for completion - just a great little story as it stands but you could take so much further

It's sooooo good !!!!!

please finsh

Please finish!

loved reading this story! hope you continue it!

I can hardly wait for another chapter, loved reading this

Thomas is a douchebag he can't respect his dying fathers wish that Jenna remain "innocent" just because his dick gets hard. I wish the preachers son was actually nice and kind, instead of a sex-crazed asshole, who can't even respect his sick father's wish that Jenna stay "innocent".

Agreed...like really? That's what makes her more beautiful? Slave mentality for a slave story I guess.

what the fuck is wrong with you people: Jenna was more beautiful than her mother because of her long wavy hair and golden brown skin what a load of shit. it gets a one

Nice start, you should continue.

Five.

please continue!

A great start and would love to know what happen to Jenna. Please do continue with the story.

When can we expect the next part?

Please continue... I would like to see what happens next very much I would XD

i love ur start i hope u have not let this story good its very good

Great story! please continue it soon

Please continue soon.

The romance can come later when Will shows up, I really hope Thomas rapes her.

i rly enjoyed the beggining and i hope to read more real soon

i like where this is going.

for a first stoy its really good, better than quite a few ive read..hopefully he will not rape jenna and a romance could build up? looking forward to a second chapter =)

It takes a brave writer to place a story during slave times in America, but you've done it with an authentic and inoffensive air. I'm a huge history fan, but found some parts of the story to be a bit mired in historical detail. That said, I'm very eager to read future parts!

continue. Just enticing enough to become a great story series. :)