All Comments on 'Jennifer Esposito'

I read this story cos I saw the Priest's name as a thank you before the story. I'm not gonna compare you two, cos The Priest has been at it for much longer, but it was a nice first attempt. You can only get better with your stories. I'll keep an eye for more stories from you in the future. Keep up the good work.

... why you had to rush the story like this? It's a great story, as long the idea of the story is concerned. Jennifer Esposito is hot as hell, but it's almost a sin to hurry in depicting the sex with her (and by the way... depicting the "lovestory" at all) the way you did... You've should try to make it slower and more detailed.