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"Well congratulations ladies! You both put on one of the most brilliant shows anyone has ever seen, there in Miami." Julie said.
"Thanks. We are very glad everyone enjoyed it. Because I know we both thoroughly enjoyed making it all happen. Now if you all don't mind, we both have 2 questions to ask of all of you." Carrie said.
"First being: Where did you all learn of our nickname? And 2nd: Who made that very pretty banner?" Jenny asked.
"Well dears. We at channel 6 sports, kept up with everything that happened in Miami. So we could keep all of your fans here informed on everything. We also got a few calls from sportscasters at our sister station there, and from tons of your fans that were there. They all informed us of your nickname. So, we came up with the idea for the banner, which we had made for you both. You both are right by choosing that name. That name really does describe how you ladies dive, and take control and dominate all of your competitions. We also had a production company start making up t-shirts, hats, and everything we could think of for all your fans. We even got your sizes from your father and had these made for the both of you." Julie told Jenny and Carrie and handed a bag to each of the ladies. "In there, are silk jerseys, silk jackets, and one pieces for you. All with your nickname and colors, each has your first names on the backs of all them. We all do hope you both will love them."
"We do! Thank you all for this warm welcome." The ladies said after all that, they held a short press conference with Julie and the other reporters. Then they said good bye, and headed for home with their family after the banner was taken down and given to them. The family finally arrived home at 4, and helped the ladies take their things up to their room.
- COMMENTS
JenniElizabethover 13 years agoAuthorI'm thankful for everyone who has taken the time to read and also for those who have replied to my stories ( and yes the bad replies too). What anonymous said doesn't bother me, I knew going in that I would have bad reviews, but that only strives to make me better. Btw, I did have some passing sex in ch 9, but had to take it out so i could get it approved, it wasn't graphic, but seeing Jenny and Carrie are still 16, Lit wouldn't allow it.
Anonymousover 13 years agoOk I generally don't bother with people who make foolish and derogatory comments but I have had enough!
Ever heard of the saying "Those who can do those who can't teach"? Well personally I find the comment an insult to teachers who give their all for their students so I wish to modify the saying "Those who can write those who can't make jealous comments"!
It is often hard to find a story to loose yourself in. Even harder to find one that seems so credible. The characters are lovable, believable, and portray good morals and values which is a rare combination.
For those with biased, negative, comments with no basis in the critical literary thinking I suggest you write something to prove your worthiness to comment in this field. However I suspect the reason that won't happen may have to do with a lack of literary understanding, talent, imagination and truth.
To the author: Well done your writing is improving and I love the development of the stories and the characters. Hope you get help with editing soon. Having someone as a soundboard can really help an author.
Congrats on another great work!
lovercat2942over 13 years agoThis chapter was a bit anticlimactic after the drama in Chapter 6, but once again is shown the resiliency of our heroines. After the gang rape, this room destruction is relatively pretty mild, but it is easy to see how Jenny and Carrie can be scared, all things considered. However, I am glad to see them reaching out to the proper sources for help instead of trying to take care of things themselves. A good sign of growth.
I like the way the perps tripped themselves up and the punishment meted out. The only thing I question somewhat is telling the 3 perps the intimate private stuff that Jenny and Carrie had gone through; however, doing so did have the desired effect. Lynn and her co-conspirators do have a lot to learn and a lot of growing up to do.
To our anonymous person who doesn't like this story, might I just suggest that there are myriad other stories on this site to choose from.
Yes, this story could be in the non-erotic section, but Jenni has indicated numerous times what her intentions are for this story and why she has put it in the lesbian sex section. I can wait several more chapters, if need be, before sex is introduced.
Peace
Anonymousover 13 years agoIt is time for you to learn a new trade......perhaps crochet or scrapbooking.
Seriously.....why is this story submitted in this category?? In fact, why is it even on this site???
