All Comments on 'Jenny & Josh Ch. 04'

I didn't comment before - I was waiting to see if this was the final chapter and I guess it is.

No matter; this was a very touching, loving story and has been a very good read.

I have no objection to a touch of incest and you managed to combine several erotic themes in this salacious yet moving tale.

I look forward to future stories from you.

Thank you for your talent and time,

Norman

While I gave it 5 Stars at the end of each chapter, I also waited for the final chapter to comment. While it was an unusual family grouping, I don't think I've read a more beautiful love story on this site, or anywhere else for that matter. You have an unusually fine talent and I am so grateful you chose to share it with us. I hope you will favor us with other submissions in the future.

Great series with great characters that had personality. I would love to see a follow-up series dealing with Sarah and Amanda's advancing pregnancies and their pregnant sex with Josh - you teased us a bit this chapter with how the pregnancy was changing Sarah's body, and that left me really hoping to revisit Josh and Jenny's family again.

This is by far and away the geatest story I have ever read on Literotica. When I got to the delivery part and she was bleedin I started to cry with heartbreak. I should tell you I'm a 58 year old man that doesn't cry at much but your story really got to me. Thank goodness it had a more haapy ending than things do in the real world Thank You so much for this story.

I have read both series of your stories in the past day, and am pleased to announce that I had 7 orgasms from them, thank you.

Also, in relation to Amanda's rape, as a rape victim myself, I feel it was quite an accurate interpretation.

Thanks for the read (and the orgasms!)

Wow... This series was great! It is a wonderful love story worthy of print publication. I felt every emotion, love, lust, anger, sadness, and joy. I even reared up at moments. I would love to see you write another story series.

I thoroughly enjoyed this series. It was so erotic. A person could feel the love radiating from this story. Keep writing.

The story was great I gave you a 1 on the score why because you didn't finish the dam story

5 stars. i wish there was one more chapter with the 5 kids and 3 moms living life. but this was a wonderful story, very erotic, full of love. THANKS

Wonderful story. Idea for a follow up is to have Sarah and amanda have girls and then have it about Chris becoming lovers to Jenny, Sarah, amanda, Vicki, Elizabeth and the two girls not born in this story. 1 man 7 woman that would take some writing skills if you are up for it lol or use Susan the cop as a main character in a different series Hope you read this comment and find the desire to write more.