All Comments on 'Jeremy's Journey Ch. 01'

Unfortunately, once again a great story that will not be continued

Sequel needed

An excellent story! Is there a Part 2? Or is that all you had?

This was a great story with a great ending, "Mom!?!?!?!"

I hope that's a 20 year old daughter who's about to introduce her mother to girl on girl love, with Jeremy's assistance and participation. I hope each of her children is a daughter. This would be a terrific story even if written by a pro. Keep this story going.

well written... good start but dont leave it here.. do continue....

Pretty well written with no obvious errors. The theme is fairly common, but well done for a first effort. Hope you continue it.