All Comments on 'Jerri Ch. 04'

Excellent, can't wait for chapter 5. Soon, PLEASE.

Boy and his mom is one thing, boy, his mom and the towne is stupid. Hope dad kicks the shit out of both of them and throws them both out. His son is a turd. Sorry, not erotic now.

Dog shit is a term commonly used by idiots that think writing should be a certain way. I will put it better, you are losing that "hottness" that comes with incest. Meaning, once you get passed a few fucks between a mother and a son it's really time to stop. The best part about incest stories IMHO is building to their first fuck, and a few fucks after that. But now you have another mom and son going into it, and I am sure then you will have the mothers 69ing each other in the next story, and so on. It's time to start a new series or/and story, but I would just let this one end. There are very few movies that are still good after sequels: For example Lethal Weapon. Your story is becoming more like Back to the Future, the first few were good then it started to get ridiculous.

The first chapter was very good. A flirtatious, sexy mother at a party who contemplates liaisons with someone other than her husband and ends up having sex with an unknown man creates conflict and tension. The second chapter resolved some of the conflict as Jerri discovered she had an incestuous relationship with her son. The question was whether she would keep that relationship going or stop it in its tracks. That was resolved and broadened as she not only coupled with her son but committed outright adultery with Mike, her son's best friend.<P>The story is well written and the sex scenes are very well done. But unless there is some sense of foreboding hanging over the group (husbands discovering the affairs?) the story will not be able to climb out of the 'stroker' category to become something really special.</P>

First chapter was brilliant..but the more chapters you write, the more i'm losing interest. This should have stopped at chapter 2.

Cant wait for another story tho....

you are losing the original sex heat from chapter #1..get matt/hubby into this family fun..with total action among your original family...and make it really hot from jeri's point of view.. and alot of other women..like myself.....and get jeri's men into hot bi action among themselves..with jeri directing and participating...

great story and the sex is fun read.

I certainly hope you continue with this amazing story. Your a gifted writer! I can only hope for more! Maybe bi sexual fun between the mother's & just maybe a gangbang for the slut mommies?