All Comments on 'Jezreal's Idol Pastime'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Badly researched

Neither women nor slaves wore togas -- they were for male citizens. Rome didn't permit city-states within its borders. Janissaries weren't established until centuries after Rome's fall. If you're not going to get the history or culture right, don't use historical names or terms. As it is, the contrast is distracting and annoying.

Sean RenaudSean Renaudover 15 years ago
Decent

Pay no attention to the idiot before me. Most don't know enough about history to care and it adds depth and interest to the story. The sex was only ok though.

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