by kooky123
Sometimes it ain't love, just a good time. I liked the real-life details and show of forethought re:pregnancy on Jill's part, yet still giving a blowjob.
Anyway, good story, just really not into the characters enough to see a sequel.
There might be more between Jill and our hero, but it could just be a classier "I couldn't believe it happened to me" Penthouse story that stands on its own.
You the author have to convince us there's more.