All Comments on 'Jill and Me'

by kooky123

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txcoatl1970txcoatl1970over 12 years ago
I liked it

Sometimes it ain't love, just a good time. I liked the real-life details and show of forethought re:pregnancy on Jill's part, yet still giving a blowjob.

Anyway, good story, just really not into the characters enough to see a sequel.

There might be more between Jill and our hero, but it could just be a classier "I couldn't believe it happened to me" Penthouse story that stands on its own.

You the author have to convince us there's more.

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