All Comments on 'Jill and The Nerd'

All the heat of this summer emanates from this story! The erotic art critics can curse you/us as they spank the monkey, but you have hit the nail on the head. Hope this is only part one.

definately hard on material! hope there's a part II cumming around the corner!!

Excellent story. I'd like this story to continue, especially in regards to increasing submission on Jill's part to Sam. I can imagine that Sam would leave his nerd status behind and become more masterful. Having Jill be dominated by Sam, even reluctantly on her part, would be recognized by all as part of her husband's fantasies and conflicted desires, like a moth to a flame.

Loved your story! Please carry on where you left off.

The writing was fairly good and the story was OK, even somewhat erotic if this is your fantasy. The problem I have with it is that the jump from vanilla sex with husband and wife being rather conventional and close-mouthed to a 3-way MMF cuckold swing-ding was quite sudden. Just because our guy visited web sites which catered to this type of lifestyle and fantasy world does not mean he really wants this without some discussion and planning with his wife, setting some limits, etc. Also, Jill is portrayed as being very conservative, does not express any desires for kinky sex, does not make noise when she cums, does not like oral, very repressed and certainly not an adventurous type of woman. How are we to believe she suddenly would wish to fuck the computer nerd and humiliate her husband? That's pretty risky to a long-standing marriage. I think a bit more development of Jill would have helped with an otherwise out-of-character behavior from this wife. Maybe a point-of-view change in the story so we get to know Jill's thinking, private fantasies, etc. We can't even blame liquor or drugs so her behavior really comes from nowhere. I assume in part 2 she will have honey-hubby lick her pussy while big dick nerdie fucks her, maybe he'll actually suck some dick while licking her out. Or, it can go into a dom-sub relationship; this is hinted in the story when hubby can't resist bending to all her orders and wishes. I think hubby (I read the story twice and can't find his name anywhere; maybe he needs no name as he is sinking so low by the end of the story, he'll just be called slave) will find the fantasy is better than the reality after a while. I mean, multiple orgasms from a 22 year old stud, how can Jill resist this? Why have any relationship with hubby any longer? Oh, I know, she really loves him and this is just sex. When it becomes just sex plus some HIV, will it still be so great?

Now that the type of wife I want.Either mine or someone elses..Great story

The talent is strong and the mind is sick - broken needle sick for male disrespect and wimpy used to be a male humiliation.<P>

Speaking of sad self humiliation - the comments of support indicate that there are a few people into disgusting self degradation - you know like the people who cut themselves.<P>

The writer consistently has one tone and one topic - his own embarrassed lack of manhood which apparently is the only subhuman fetish left which excites him and the others enough to get hard and off. Kinda numbly sad huh.

Loved every second of it, keep it up dude

And this writer shows he has a serious psychological illness. I hope he gets the counseling he needs to recover his manhood soon. As for his writing ability, most 3rd graders express themselves better than this.

Don't you just love the moral superiority of some of the reviewers? They didn't have to read it, did they? I enjoyed it and plan on showing it to my husband later! Don't let the negative comments stop you from writing more. Continue the story with the nerd or a new conquest!

Dang, another very hot story.

super story..........he got what he wants and more.......I'd like to eat her too

Excellent story. A nice hot cream pie.

And some of the best moments of my life have been spent right exactly where you left off. Talk about leaving us hanging!

It seemed a little too quick to go from him telling her about his fantasy to her making it come true and, maybe she was a little fast in making it happen. But once it got started I loved it.

Those hateful bitches should form a club somewhere in their cell and stay there. "1*" !

More likely? He got dressed, packed some things and left. The divorce was final 8 weeks later. Because really. Who wants a manipulative slut for his wife? No one!

your cock was so small it was like fucking a mushroom. 5 for a great story. Now go ahead and report me dumbass

Whorewife and cuck story.

That wasn't her first time fucking another bloke, she was to experienced . A right slut and him a real cuckold