All Comments on 'Jill's Rain Checks'

a true waste of ink.

Exchange sex for money is ............

The writer is sick.

Author, read radk's stories. Maybe you'll have an idea of what constitute a good story. Clearly you do NOT have any idea now.

a good car wreck would help clean out the gene pool

This is quite a shitty story but I'm sure the pervert sickos will love it!

This is technically an LW story. I think the pay2play aspect is stretching the definition a lot, however! I don't understand why the lady's pleasure (usually feigned, I am sure) obligates her to confer extra time and benefit! The John is willing to pay, the Sheila is willing to screw for that pay.

Moralists...go to the Incest category. You will find 'really socially unacceptable' behavior to grinch about! This story was pretty competently done, all things considered, within this genre!

Great story.

...lool...when is that supposed to happen? Do you know how it goes?

I'll tell you what happens. She catches an std then gives it to her husband. He gets pissed when he finds out and leaves. No divorce. No trial separation. He takes off. She gets so distraught she attempts suicide and fails.

That's as far as I go. I don't give a fuck what happens after.

Despite Lickey's griping about the truth, this story really does suck.