All Comments on 'Jimmy Palin You Asshole'

one of the best. Congratulations. G.Belgium

A fast ride through Car sales. You missed a few tenses and the dialog was hard to attribute, but it was a enjoyable story.

Try again and edit more completely.

I see by some of the other public reviews that it is not known that you are professional writer.. Like I say very time I read one of your stories "another great story". I

haven't read a bad one yet.. and keep them coming...

Thank you. tom anon

Fantastic. I was really drawn into the dialogues and plot suspense. Just had to read on - and postpone my grocery run for a few days ;-)

Remember reading a previous story of Yours where careers,

business, pleasure and evolving relationships were similarly well featured. Yes, there were a few hiccups the text flow, but those were few and the magic worked for me nevertheless.

Thank You for sharing You gifted writing here and all the best. May good karma be with You.