by allthewayin
While the story was completely hot and I liked it. I agree with Jimm. No connection to the holidays. I also would have liked a bit more back story and maybe a little more description of the characters. The massive gang bang came as a shock as I was only expecting the Master. On a side note I find it hard to believe that she didn't come until after the fifth guy. Sluts got some damn good control if that's the case!
Other than the card was hanging on the Christmas tree there was no connection of this story to the contest theme. Character development was nearly non-existent.