by vyasya
He should learn to write properly first and then read only that which pleases him. If he is so stuck on being a man and not a wimp he should sign up for a tour of duty in Iraq and leave the rest of us alone.
Though I don't like this kind of story, I'm really getting tired of the idiot that writes "stupid wimp" insult, insult, insult. Can you go away? There is no need for this kind of comment.
Comments are supposed to be a critique of the story, not a way for you to vent your spleen by insulting the writer. It's a story, you idiot! Besides you can't even be original with your comments because every story and author you encounter you say the darn same thing.
Author keep writing.
Dear Vyasya,
Excellent story! Great Going. But I have one complaint - You did not finish your earlier story. Please finish it and carry it to a logical conclusion! And btw, its good to see you again!
u r the writer...I am searching for
Thnx for great story
plz begin many more cuckold ,wittol ,hotwife , wife impregnation & mangal sutra humiliation stories
wife calling & slowly transforming cuck hubby as her brother in society is kinky too
Swopping partners need not be a zero-sum game. It can bring about a new quality which is more than the sum of its parts.
I think this part can be made more interesting if Sameer says no to the theatre program first, women laugh and the men try to get him change his mind. Then he says to prove he can handle the situation he is not stopping Mayuri! Then the point is dismissed as the number of men and women are unequal and Mayuri herself urges Sameer to take it as a game! This way Mayuri's interest can be highlighted! For Vyasya, thanks