All Comments on 'Journey on the Orient Express 02'

Crap

1*

did you spend writing this - because they were totally wasted.

One of my (17) pet peeves is the failure to establish some form of tension in a story (whether erotic or not!). This story has absolutely NONE! If I were a 16 year-old male in that dining car, I would consider a ripe plum like this dropping into my lap with zero drama to be heaven! (yeah, and pretty much the same now -OK?)

Not so much as a reader looking for an interesting story! Good part? Sunjeev is hung 'meaty' but apparently less than 13" long! (Not really enough!)

3* (barely)

Sad little WACC story 1*

Loved Sunjeev making love to your wife. Admire smooth, older and charming Indian gentlemen.

No way to top that trip. good detail hot dessert, leaves me wanting more... great nipple play...

Cucking on the Orient Express. That isn't how I remember the story.