All Comments on 'Julie Waited Ch. 01'

by the_thinker97

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Dutchgirl82Dutchgirl82almost 10 years ago
sparkling eyes

I just clapped my hands and did 'oohh I want the chapter to go on! I want to see!''

So you've got me on a hook, and I hope you are a fast writer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
It was good but...

In some paragraphs it was a little to worded and I found myself skipping through most of it. It had a good story line to it. I want to read more of it though.

elisebeeelisebeealmost 10 years ago
The best I've read in a while

Skillfully written and unique. You definitely have my interest piqued!

zetagirlzetagirlalmost 10 years ago
interesting

I don't really know where this is heading, but I'm looking forward to chapter two and finding out!

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 10 years ago
Very interesting tale

You write her fear and anxiety well, and I loved her besting him.

Be interesting to see where you take this

Shysub412Shysub412almost 10 years ago
Loved it

Really well written and I'm intrigued as to what happens next.

I love a sub with Her own mind!!

5 stars.

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