by the_thinker97
I just clapped my hands and did 'oohh I want the chapter to go on! I want to see!''
So you've got me on a hook, and I hope you are a fast writer.
In some paragraphs it was a little to worded and I found myself skipping through most of it. It had a good story line to it. I want to read more of it though.
Skillfully written and unique. You definitely have my interest piqued!
I don't really know where this is heading, but I'm looking forward to chapter two and finding out!
You write her fear and anxiety well, and I loved her besting him.
Be interesting to see where you take this
Really well written and I'm intrigued as to what happens next.
I love a sub with Her own mind!!
5 stars.