All Comments on 'Julie's New Job (Her Version)'

but now where does the revenge come in .... no way wouls i let this happen .... and i still say those rings lol ... how bad would it hurt to pull them out ... bad i know both tits ... but oh my the clit ... it just might pull it completely off .... no way would someone else tell me what to do without dying

that girl has no brains in her head she should have turned herself around and went home

Atlanta,Ga

To all of the negative commentors, this is fiction and only fiction. Enjoy it for what it is.

Keep it up, great story line so far.

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I like her version very much and are looking forward to more

What kind of fantasy word do you live in. Just put Bob Seger or Tom Petty in the box and you might wake up!!!!!!!

and now the journey begins, TK U MLJ LV NV

Time to seriously hurt Joan...

I love Cliffhanger titled his comment, "As I said before, you are sick" and then goes on to berate the author. Cliff, get some self-awareness. You obviously love the story and hate yourself for loving it. You read the first part, hated it and *then* sought out the second one, read it, and hated it too. That's the effect of these stories when they work. Apparently the story worked for you.

I'm not sure that this entire chapter was necessary to further the overall story or that it really helped. But I guess we needed to know more about what Julie had done. It seemed a little over the top, even for fiction, but it wasn't too far gone. Julie isn't very smart and I don't care for obviously dumb characters but we'll see if you can save this mess.

Time to get a gun.

But you seem to be a pretty good writer. Please keep it up.

That aspect is what makes stories like this so intriguing. The helplessness of it all. Husband and wife at the mercy of a soulless person. A person who has no conscience and has no compunction about using you up and throwing you away. Still a 5 Star Rating.

Yes an erotic story, fine but i like some plausibility. I cannot imagine a scenario where a wife tells hubby that a friend has offered her a job, without hubby asking about the business and the job that has been offered. Nothing was asked or mentioned about what the job entails or working hours, all normal automatic questions.To be fair she made an assumption as to her duties but even that was not mentioned.This omission lets the the story down, other than that a good erotic yarn.

agree with fifteen16

You write as if you never grasped basic composition. Enough with the drama!! Lose the exclamation points!! Piss poor writing, story with too many holes to list.

only Jon taking a grenade to all these assholes could improve this story