All Comments on 'Just a Day at the Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
What A Waste

Just nonsense, please quit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
It was a cute story, don't listen to any jackasses!

You need to proof-read your work, or get someone to do it for you, but otherwise, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good

This tale brought pleasant memories of our early days at nude beaches.

Randy56rRandy56r6 months ago

Great story, keep writing, maybe a next chapter as the couple up the anti a bit!

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