All Comments on 'Just a Dream'

by GothWannabe

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GothWannabeGothWannabeover 19 years agoAuthor
It's my first time

This is my first erotica, based on a dream I had. It's one of my favorites, and I hope you all like it too. Thank you for reading it!

SEX_VAMPYRESEX_VAMPYREover 19 years ago
GOOD FUCK STORY WRITE MORE

You could have added that her neck had marks on it.I enjoyed your erotica.Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Is there going to be a sequel ?

A very good beginning. This story shows promise but is that all there is ? Is there more to come ? please say yes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
More, MORE!!!

This is a great story. You gotta keep writing!

LadyAlastrinaLadyAlastrinaover 17 years ago
More please!

This is one of my favorite fantasies, and this story was extremely well written. I LOVED IT!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
WONDERFUL

This was an excellent story! One of my favorites so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow!

This was well written, and HOT. Keep writing!

LadyAlastrinaLadyAlastrinaover 14 years ago
Ooooh!

Oh, this was hot. I want to read more!

kinkyangelkinkyangelabout 13 years ago

Great story! Who doesn't want a man like that, who can make you cum and cum? I know I do. :P

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