All Comments on 'Just Good Friends'

Although as a personal ego trip kind of thing, I'm happy with this story, comments on the discussion board point out a few failings along with "why didn't he" and "why didn't she". I've decided as a result of these comments to rewrite/revise the story.

It would be great if you were to come back in a week or two and see if you think the story has improved.

Thanks, Armistead

and the xtra Bennys are super 2... TK U MLJ LV NV