All Comments on 'Just Them Ch. 03'

by Bob Clark Jr.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Make me smile

Make me scream, monkey-boy.......... :-)

Funny real funny.

Thanks

rmikesmirmikesmiabout 20 years ago
Great Job

Please continue with the story. You left it just rightto make readers want more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
You don't punch women.

You don't hit women unless they are literally trying to kill you. Yes she called the woman he loved a whore and wouldn't leave him alone I get it. A rude insult and a rude bump as he walks pas maybe spilling her drink on her would have sufficed. You just had to ruin the story with him hitting a woman. I quit reading there since it disgusted me.

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