All Comments on 'Kara's Spring Break Pictures'

Very enjoyable story. You describe things so well. It was nice to have the story behind the photos. And the part where the mother came in you took in wonderful and hysterical directions . Nice job!

I thought this was a clever set up, the way the girl ended up in a pickle and had to get naked in front of the guys in the closet. Entertaining and not forced. Also, how could you not like a story by a writer named DonnerBBQ?

I just blundered on your work recently and have thoroughly enjoyed myself while reading it all. This seems to be one of your simpler story lines, but it had a couple of twists that made it easy to enjoy reading. Forcing yourself into a delemma is great..."get in trouble" or "get really embarrassed". Fortunately she chose strip...loved it. Keep writing! Thanks.

That is the kind of thing that could happen to someone. That makes it much more interesting. Some of this stuff is way too far out.

I don't normally get a chance to rate or comment on the stories I read on here, but I liked this one because of the teasing aspect. Also thought you did a good job capturing the mindset of kids in their early college years. Maybe you should have a sequel where Kara gets visited on the next college break by the guys and they give it to her hard.