All Comments on 'Kass's Master/Slave Initiation'

i wish my master/husband would do something like that for me. it got me so hot and wet

All of your stories are so freaking hot!

This story is written in a tacky way. The s/s/M situation is too awkward and the slaves are mute except when cumming. They need to comment or think out loud. It seems to be paper dolls. No one wins when there is no emotion and no interplay between the characters.