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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great writing, wonderful read

I agree with the earlier commenter that the kitchen scene was one well-written—extremely well-written—episode. Great description of the action and economical and believable rendition of their thoughts. For some reason most dad/daughter stories don't do much for me but this one did. (Son/mom are always hotter.) I hope you write more without rushing blindly into son impregnates mother, dad impregnates daughter red-neck land. But, I really hope they stay together—or at least visit each other from time to time!

Love,

Bets in Oregon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
HOT

HOT AND HORNY!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Love it!! The bit where the dad and the daughter explore each other in the kitchen is one of the most erotic things I have ever read.

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Well....I try to be a writer. I want my stories to have characters in them. Maybe someone strong and confident, maybe someone a bit nerdy, a bit shy....like me really! I try to think of really unique situations and a few unexpected twists and turns. I may not get it right all ...