All Comments on 'Kate Visits The Hospital'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Next thing

The next thing heard was the sound of an 870 Remington pump jacking a round in the chamber prior to slaughtering this whore and all else involved.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
idiot anons

Internet anon tough guy = real life sissy wuss

Husband might have a good civil case against the doc, who cares about a pre-nup if he can sue the doc, hospital, etc

Feel badly for daughter but hey; that lawsuit should provide a heckuva settlement so at least her college tuition is going to be pre-paid

demantoiddemantoidabout 13 years ago
Good story...

I felt I was hurried through to the ending. Like being on a museum tour, being rushed to make sure I saw everything and then outside, felt I missed savoring the experience. Who were these people in this story? Who knows? At the end...Who cares! Normally I like an economy of style and prose, but this just missed. The sex was extremely hot and well written on the positive side.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
lol @ "Remington solution works for us"

wimp_hater = self loathing?

#1: 8th graders should not be reading stories on this site.

#2: Isn't it past your bedtime?

Well written story so far, no doubt the pain of her divorce + lawsuit will make her back pain seem pretty mild in comparison

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
well, this 'anon' likes the story so far

In terms of feeling a bit rushed, maybe so but better that than being too wordy. Maybe the editing (which was good) took out a couple sentences that could have stayed.

Good effort so far, keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
good stuff

really enjoyed it-will there be another part?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Part Two

any shot at part two?!

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Cuck loses willing whore to a doctor.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Cuck loses willing whore to a doctor. Cuckettes lose their mind over a comment.

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