by jack4221
The next thing heard was the sound of an 870 Remington pump jacking a round in the chamber prior to slaughtering this whore and all else involved.
Internet anon tough guy = real life sissy wuss
Husband might have a good civil case against the doc, who cares about a pre-nup if he can sue the doc, hospital, etc
Feel badly for daughter but hey; that lawsuit should provide a heckuva settlement so at least her college tuition is going to be pre-paid
I felt I was hurried through to the ending. Like being on a museum tour, being rushed to make sure I saw everything and then outside, felt I missed savoring the experience. Who were these people in this story? Who knows? At the end...Who cares! Normally I like an economy of style and prose, but this just missed. The sex was extremely hot and well written on the positive side.
wimp_hater = self loathing?
#1: 8th graders should not be reading stories on this site.
#2: Isn't it past your bedtime?
Well written story so far, no doubt the pain of her divorce + lawsuit will make her back pain seem pretty mild in comparison
In terms of feeling a bit rushed, maybe so but better that than being too wordy. Maybe the editing (which was good) took out a couple sentences that could have stayed.
Good effort so far, keep writing!
Cuck loses willing whore to a doctor. Cuckettes lose their mind over a comment.