All Comments on 'Kate's Capture Ch. 08'

i want them to be together...does that really have to be the end?

He wants her as His, let Him have her for eternity. Deep within, she already knows who her True Master is. i myself, having the heart of a true submissive; knows who her True Master is. Please i beg of You, let this happen???

this was much better and satisfying on some levels.. but i reallllllly want the captain and kate to end up together, her as slave to him. Please let them be together..

i was really surprised at how quickly your story ended although it did end well...hopefully there will be more?....in a different possible direction??? She needs to serve now, her nervousness will be helped by that and finding the love in her Captain...sister truly dead?...rescue of her cousin with the baby?...lots of great possiblitys here to keep this one going, i love how you left the door open on that. as always i look forward to anything you write. Thank you for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Ditto to everything said below. Please write some more about what happens to Kate.

Just so you know, I am working on Kate's Capture Part 2 -- Ahmed coming back for what he bought. Don't worry, there is more with the captain, too. No, his sister is not really dead. That's all I plan to give away at this time *evil grin* Alas, with my 24/7 slave duties, writing time is at a premium, so bear with me. - Passion St.John

Great story. Well written. Very descriptive.

I can't wait to read more about Kate and the captain.

Great story!!!!

please please pleas you have to continue the story he is in love with her please let them end up together...

please please pleas you have to continue the story he is in love with her please let them end up together...

please lets get the caption and her together to romantic ending to a great story you got to tell us what happen please you got to get them together

That was awesome.... BEAUTIFUl!!!

Realli loved it!

this has been the best story i have read on here yet , it was well written and kept you reading . didn,t want it to end. thank you for taking the time to write it

Please get the captain involved again! I read the two first episodes of the second series, and I want him to come blazing in, guns in hand and rescue her! My heart needs it!

cant you do one when kate and the captain get together and she becomes his slave or something

Thanks , that was an awesome story .

What a well-written story. I really love it. I wouldn't change a thing.

Very much enjoyed every morsel of your story. Would love to find further adventures of Kate & her Captain in the future.

why the fuck didnt you let cap'n's sis live? we didnt even get a rough estimate of how she looked and how well a slave she was! you fucking bastard that wrote this! the cap'n shouldve been able to fuck his sis first!

why couldn't you let Captain fuck her at least once.

Loved this ....so well written !

i waited till the end to comment further... this series has forced me to accept the fact that mans inhumanity to man knows no bounds. this is true in literature, as it is also true in real life. i also believe wholeheartedly in the concept of karma. sleep peacefully my friend.

Not being funny but did anyone else find Jott50 comment a little mudery. Would of slept a whole lot better before you said that.

Found myself skimming quickly through the whole story....Kate's treatment is just too awful to read about and after a certain point, the story stops being titillating and becomes torcherous. But I was rooting for Kate the entire way through and I wanted to see Malachi get a taste of his own medicine; so I kept skimming. So happy you brought Kate to a happy ending. Thank you.

Maybe this story should've gone in the noncon section? Just a thought...

An amazing story with an amazing ending keep it up!

This excellent story need more!

A fantastically erotic and well-crafted short story. Not a flaw to be found. Alas, it came to an end.